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RE: False Omen - Silktie - 29-12-2009 06:43 PM
Well, if you insist...
Kidding.
The thing that puts me off most of all is when writers don't proof-read their stories properly and post it with a lot of errors. Especially if you know that they are actually English speaking. But I didn't spot a single error in yours, so well done.
RE: False Omen - JHyde - 29-12-2009 06:45 PM
I am a compulsive editor. Seriously.
RE: False Omen - Silktie - 29-12-2009 06:59 PM
Lol, me too! I can't even post this short message without re-reading it three times to check for errors.
RE: False Omen - Tea Lady - 29-12-2009 08:55 PM
A great read. We really do have some members on this forum with real talent.
RE: False Omen - lwhite53 - 30-12-2009 08:11 PM
Good start. Like the Ruth-perspective idea and the twist at the end is interesting. I'm onto chap 2 right now!