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RE: False Omen Ch. 6 - lwhite53 - 05-01-2010 08:00 PM
No, I don't think you need a warning -- it was just, as Silktie said, harrowing. Took a couple of moments to breathe again.
Poor Bushra -- the woman didn't do anything wrong and yet she's dead. More collateral damage for Ruth to wrap her mind around.
RE: False Omen Ch. 6 - almh - 05-01-2010 09:37 PM
Oh wow, that was good
RE: False Omen Ch. 6 - Kirayuki - 05-01-2010 10:03 PM
Poor Ruth.
(She needs something to go right for her for once. *hint hint*
)Seriously though, your writing's fantastic!
RE: False Omen Ch. 6 - Fidget - 05-01-2010 10:14 PM
Great story so far I am really enjoying it, well done
RE: False Omen Ch. 6 - YourFutureMuse - 05-01-2010 10:19 PM
Absolutely loved it! Topless Lucas, tense and emotional scenes, the word nemo
It had absolutely everything! You are such a talented writer! Once I started reading I was, yet again, completely captured by the story!! All the scenes and character interactions are so believable! Its as if it has come straight out of an episode... if I were Kudos I would hire you straight away 
RE: False Omen Ch. 6 - Beatriz - 06-01-2010 03:06 AM
wow!! this one was so good!! Poor Ruth, another dead... I didn't see that coming!!
Nail-biting chapter!! Well done!!
RE: False Omen Ch. 6 - Silktie - 06-01-2010 07:21 AM
(05-01-2010 07:57 PM)JHyde Wrote: Maybe I should put a violence warning at the top? I didn't think it was anything more than what the show does.
No, don't think that's necessary. It's just so well written that I can fully identify with the characters' plight. It's not the violence that makes it harrowing, it's the tension you create.
RE: False Omen Ch. 6 - kirmostar - 06-01-2010 08:14 AM
OMG I woke up to see Ch 7 so have quickly read this and it's awesome - thank you for the scene with Lucas and Ros in the mens' room - hilarious! Poor Ruth and obv poor Bushra. The tension built was brilliant.
Right, now off to read Ch7.......
Love it!!!
RE: False Omen Ch. 6 - HellsBells - 07-01-2010 12:26 PM
Excellent writing , I am really enjoying this story.