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RE: Epoque Ch.1 - lwhite53 - 21-01-2010 08:35 PM "to go and play an extra string to Harry's bow for the benefit of the brass" -- just re-read the story and found this -- what a great line! Love how you play with the word "brass." Really nice use of language. RE: Epoque Ch.1 - HellsBells - 22-01-2010 04:43 PM I really like this, you have captured them so well. I can just imagine this happening, it is written perfectly. RE: Epoque Ch.1 - Kirayuki - 22-01-2010 11:12 PM Yay! Finally got around to reading it and i'm liking how it's set up. I'm looking forward to the next installment. I agree with lwhite53 that the Brass line is fantastic wording. Your writing is fantastic! +Rep for you! |