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Epoque Ch.1
21-01-2010, 07:51 PM
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RE: Epoque Ch.1
"Hair and teeth" line -- I laughed again! Like the story's set up and their continued uneasiness around each other -- so true to (their) life.

I wanted Ruth to be angrier for longer, not to just accept his explanation for why he hadn't told her directly about the conference -- he takes her for granted and she needs to call him on it. Otherwise, I like this, so far!

harry
"What is the truth?"
"Betrayal is a cancer. Let it eat your soul, not mine."
"Please tell me this isn't going where I think it's going."
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Epoque Ch.1 - JHyde - 21-01-2010, 11:48 AM
RE: Epoque Ch.1 - Tea Lady - 21-01-2010, 01:21 PM
RE: Epoque Ch.1 - JHyde - 21-01-2010, 01:25 PM
RE: Epoque Ch.1 - Beatriz - 21-01-2010, 01:32 PM
RE: Epoque Ch.1 - Beatriz - 21-01-2010, 03:44 PM
RE: Epoque Ch.1 - Silktie - 21-01-2010, 04:41 PM
RE: Epoque Ch.1 - lwhite53 - 21-01-2010 07:51 PM
RE: Epoque Ch.1 - JHyde - 21-01-2010, 07:55 PM
RE: Epoque Ch.1 - lwhite53 - 21-01-2010, 08:21 PM
RE: Epoque Ch.1 - almh - 21-01-2010, 08:21 PM
RE: Epoque Ch.1 - lwhite53 - 21-01-2010, 08:35 PM
RE: Epoque Ch.1 - HellsBells - 22-01-2010, 04:43 PM
RE: Epoque Ch.1 - Kirayuki - 22-01-2010, 11:12 PM

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