On With the Snow (Chapter 2)

[TygerBright]

had the time to read both chapters in one go now, taking my sweet time.. and I can't believe I'm thinking this, let alone saying it out loud but
I'm soooooo looking forward to the next chapter of a H/R story

very well written, softly and leaving a lot to the imagination of your readers..
I very much enjoyed Jo's thoughts on the matter, made me giggle.. as did the "domestic dispute" with Zaf
and Harry and Ruth finally get to finish THAT conversation...
...and the term "kids" is very fitting for the team... and the idea of terrorists skiing or skating across the Thames with their little sleighs packed with explosives... brilliant
you really write them very well, and I'm not even missing Lucas

NEXT CHAPTER PLEASE!!!!

still, I won't be going over to the "fluffy" side..