'For his first trick, the terrorist presents....' Ch. 6
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27-03-2010, 11:16 AM
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RE: 'For his first trick, the terrorist presents....' Ch. 6
Lovely chapter, well worth the wait. Loved Ros single handedly saving Lucas and his wry acknowledgement that he wouldn't be hearing the end of it soon. Slightly surprised by Lucas losing it at the end but a brilliant twist nontheless. The action scenes were very believable and you write them well. Looking forward to the next chapter already. Hope RL gets better for you.
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