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29-03-2010, 01:52 AM
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RE: 'For his first trick, the terrorist presents....' Ch. 6
Single-handed Ros -- you go girl!! Great chapter -- action sequences worked really well. And Lucas losing it rang very true -- the flashback brought on by curses and the spitting -- and then he lashes out. Very believable.
 "What is the truth?" "Betrayal is a cancer. Let it eat your soul, not mine." "Please tell me this isn't going where I think it's going." |
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