Last night of Freedom
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08-04-2010, 06:39 PM
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RE: Last night of Freedom
Hey Lukyan, I really enjoyed this. But be careful that you write in the tense that the original paragraph is written in. Don't switch between present and past tenses.
Unfortunately, you can't enter this now that it is no longer original. By that, we man that you've already had feedback on it so it wouldn't be fair to then enter it in the contest. But I really hope you write something else for it! Many thanks to Tyger for a terrific signature |
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Last night of Freedom - Lukyan Lyubof - 07-04-2010, 07:10 PM
RE: Last night of Freedom - Aria - 07-04-2010, 10:25 PM
RE: Last night of Freedom - TygerBright - 07-04-2010, 10:41 PM
RE: Last night of Freedom - Lukyan Lyubof - 08-04-2010, 09:13 AM
RE: Last night of Freedom - JHyde - 08-04-2010 06:39 PM
RE: Last night of Freedom - Lukyan Lyubof - 08-04-2010, 07:10 PM
RE: Last night of Freedom - Nia M - 13-04-2010, 05:07 PM
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