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Ruth's Diary - No.11 (3.1)
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08-04-2010, 08:07 PM
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RE: Ruth's Diary - No.11
Great entry JHyde, you convey Ruth's concerns for both Harry and Tom brilliantly. One typo that I noticed, in paragraph 4 you refer to Christine Dale as Christine Quinn.
 We move on from this It's the realisation that I make a negligible difference Sometimes you have to give a man a chance |
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Ruth's Diary - No.11 (3.1) - JHyde - 08-04-2010, 06:31 PM
RE: Ruth's Diary - No.11 - Tea Lady - 08-04-2010, 07:14 PM
RE: Ruth's Diary - No.11 - Aria - 08-04-2010 08:07 PM
RE: Ruth's Diary - No.11 - JHyde - 08-04-2010, 08:10 PM
RE: Ruth's Diary - No.11 - lwhite53 - 08-04-2010, 10:59 PM
RE: Ruth's Diary - No.11 - Silktie - 09-04-2010, 05:51 AM
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