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[ENTRY] The Proposition
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21-04-2010, 07:04 PM
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RE: [ENTRY] The Proposition
Thanks for the positive comments, guys. Like HellsBells, this is the first piece of creative writing I've done since leaving school. (I don't think doing my accounts, counts as creative writing
 )Re: Harry: he isn't jealous as such because he fancies Elizaveta or anything. But he is maybe slightly jealous that Lucas has found someone and is happy. Also Elizaveta is Russian, the traditional enemy pre-series 1. I have a mental image of Harry being slightly bitter around then - his wife has re-married and he never sees his children and then Lucas, with the happiness of a man in love, reminds him of what is missing in his life. Possibly I am overthinking it 
 We move on from this It's the realisation that I make a negligible difference Sometimes you have to give a man a chance |
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[ENTRY] The Proposition - Aria - 17-04-2010, 09:25 AM
RE: [ENTRY] The Proposition - fanofChristine - 17-04-2010, 11:21 AM
RE: [ENTRY] The Proposition - Lukyan Lyubof - 17-04-2010, 12:40 PM
RE: [ENTRY] The Proposition - HellsBells - 21-04-2010, 01:51 PM
RE: [ENTRY] The Proposition - Tea Lady - 21-04-2010, 02:49 PM
RE: [ENTRY] The Proposition - Aria - 21-04-2010 07:04 PM
RE: [ENTRY] The Proposition - Jhokur - 22-04-2010, 05:44 AM
RE: [ENTRY] The Proposition - picard1109 - 24-04-2010, 06:13 PM
RE: [ENTRY] The Proposition - redlyn - 04-09-2010, 10:26 PM
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