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Ruth's Diary - No. 15 (3.5)
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13-05-2010, 01:11 PM
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RE: Ruth's Diary - No. 15
Brilliant entry, Beatriz. You show Ruth's loneliness and her need for a connection with somebody beautifully. I loved the opening paragraph which set up the remainder of the entry. Her wistfulness at Zoe's happiness contrasted well with her inherent loneliness. Also her pessimism regarding her life away from MI5 comes through. Loved the line, "I got on with things, as I always do. I know my place." Liked the ending with her realising that Harry may have ulterior motives in disciplining her.
 We move on from this It's the realisation that I make a negligible difference Sometimes you have to give a man a chance |
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Ruth's Diary - No. 15 (3.5) - Beatriz - 13-05-2010, 12:38 PM
RE: Ruth's Diary - No. 15 - Aria - 13-05-2010 01:11 PM
RE: Ruth's Diary - No. 15 - Tea Lady - 13-05-2010, 04:14 PM
RE: Ruth's Diary - No. 15 - Silktie - 13-05-2010, 04:30 PM
RE: Ruth's Diary - No. 15 - lwhite53 - 14-05-2010, 03:24 PM
RE: Ruth's Diary - No. 15 - spooksdreamer - 15-05-2010, 01:57 AM
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