Ruth's Diary - No. 15 (3.5)
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14-05-2010, 03:24 PM
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RE: Ruth's Diary - No. 15
Great entry -- loved that Ruth knew what she was doing was wrong but went right ahead and did it anyway. And the juxtaposition of Zoe's happiness and R's loneliness was terrific. As was the the "thrill of the chase" and "chocolate" -- great imagery.
"What is the truth?" "Betrayal is a cancer. Let it eat your soul, not mine." "Please tell me this isn't going where I think it's going." |
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Ruth's Diary - No. 15 (3.5) - Beatriz - 13-05-2010, 12:38 PM
RE: Ruth's Diary - No. 15 - Aria - 13-05-2010, 01:11 PM
RE: Ruth's Diary - No. 15 - Tea Lady - 13-05-2010, 04:14 PM
RE: Ruth's Diary - No. 15 - Silktie - 13-05-2010, 04:30 PM
RE: Ruth's Diary - No. 15 - lwhite53 - 14-05-2010 03:24 PM
RE: Ruth's Diary - No. 15 - spooksdreamer - 15-05-2010, 01:57 AM
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