Home Run - Chapter 4

[A Cousin]

Aaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! That last line is lovely. Its the dichotomy of Harry's personality that is so attractive. You have illustrated this perfectly between his pig-headed refusal to get treatment and kissing Ruth's picture every night.

Ros' little joke about the delicateness of the junior officers is spot on tone wise.

Thanks for letting us into Harry's bedroom. You have clearly thought about this a lot. I'd like to hear more of why it is definitely Harry's bedroom.

BTW, I check Fan Fic every day to see if you have put another chapter up.