Irresistible Force

[JHyde]

This was really lovely, Silktie. I like the use of the present tense here - it works well.

The dining with pigs line was especially good, I could hear that one coming from Harry. The simplicity of them saying they don't want to do this alone anymore in Harry's office also works very well - you know that's how I see it happening on the show.

The only thing I might suggest is that I would have liked to read just exactly how Harry stuffed up in his office, taking it out on Ruth and Lucas, with some dialogue. I think that would give us a heart wrenching before the pay off that comes immediately afterwards.

Me likey.