Blood For Blood Part I
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30-08-2010, 09:15 AM
(This post was last modified: 30-08-2010 09:19 AM by JHyde.)
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RE: Blood For Blood Part I
I'm really digging this Silktie - I like that it's drawing in stuff we know from Harry's Diary and nice to see someone else moving on from getting Harry and Ruth together and just writing them as a couple.
One small thing - when you give Harry a big chunk of exposition, it might be better to break it up a bit. Especially when there are lots of organisations' names in the chunk. Can't wait for the next chapter. Many thanks to Tyger for a terrific signature |
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Blood For Blood Part I - Silktie - 29-08-2010, 12:41 PM
RE: Blood For Blood Part I - Tea Lady - 29-08-2010, 07:55 PM
RE: Blood For Blood Part I - Nia M - 29-08-2010, 08:26 PM
RE: Blood For Blood Part I - lwhite53 - 29-08-2010, 08:46 PM
RE: Blood For Blood Part I - Lukyan Lyubof - 29-08-2010, 08:47 PM
RE: Blood For Blood Part I - JHyde - 30-08-2010 09:15 AM
RE: Blood For Blood Part I - Beatriz - 02-09-2010, 11:03 AM
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