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El Al 318 Part III
04-12-2010, 06:43 AM
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RE: El Al 318 Part III
You've really hit a nice balance with this fic in terms of dialogue and prose. I liked that Gold Commander made a return! Esther is a good character, looking forward to seeing how she develops.

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El Al 318 Part III - Silktie - 27-11-2010, 06:13 PM
RE: El Al 318 Part III - lwhite53 - 27-11-2010, 06:45 PM
RE: El Al 318 Part III - HellsBells - 27-11-2010, 07:08 PM
RE: El Al 318 Part III - Tea Lady - 27-11-2010, 08:19 PM
RE: El Al 318 Part III - Aria - 27-11-2010, 08:40 PM
RE: El Al 318 Part III - A Cousin - 28-11-2010, 04:46 AM
RE: El Al 318 Part III - Obsession - 29-11-2010, 10:10 AM
RE: El Al 318 Part III - JHyde - 04-12-2010 06:43 AM

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