Saviours of the North Sea Part IV
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23-02-2011, 04:28 PM
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RE: Saviours of the North Sea Part IV
Plot...? Oh, yeah, Russian ship somewhere in the North Sea. A big portion of the reason I like your fics is that you have the talent for balancing plot and character. A bit of fan-ficous interruptous is OK. Really, really OK!
And now back to maturity. Favorite bits: “You’re one in almost seven billion, Ruth. Why would I give up on that?” It is indeed just that simple. You always do such a good job of getting the characters individual speech patterns. Harry is so archaic sometimes. In a "turn about the grounds" kind of way. These two in particular jumped out to me as very Harry-esque. “Well, we have ablutions.” and I won’t pretend that I don’t have feelings for you, or that I don’t find you desirable to the point of distraction.” Looking forward to more. Now cracks a noble heart. Good-night, sweet [Spooks]; And flights of angels sing thee to thy rest. ~Wm. Shakespeare, Hamlet |
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Saviours of the North Sea Part IV - Silktie - 23-02-2011, 06:10 AM
RE: Saviours of the North Sea Part IV - Tea Lady - 23-02-2011, 08:32 AM
RE: Saviours of the North Sea Part IV - Aria - 23-02-2011, 02:00 PM
RE: Saviours of the North Sea Part IV - A Cousin - 23-02-2011 04:28 PM
RE: Saviours of the North Sea Part IV - DogSoSmall - 23-02-2011, 06:30 PM
RE: Saviours of the North Sea Part IV - HellsBells - 23-02-2011, 06:58 PM
RE: Saviours of the North Sea Part IV - DogSoSmall - 24-02-2011, 07:34 PM
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