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Saviours of the North Sea Part IV
23-02-2011, 04:28 PM
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RE: Saviours of the North Sea Part IV
Plot...? Oh, yeah, Russian ship somewhere in the North Sea. A big portion of the reason I like your fics is that you have the talent for balancing plot and character. A bit of fan-ficous interruptous is OK. Really, really OK! Wink

And now back to maturity.

Favorite bits:

“You’re one in almost seven billion, Ruth. Why would I give up on that?” It is indeed just that simple.

You always do such a good job of getting the characters individual speech patterns. Harry is so archaic sometimes. In a "turn about the grounds" kind of way. These two in particular jumped out to me as very Harry-esque.

“Well, we have ablutions.”

and

I won’t pretend that I don’t have feelings for you, or that I don’t find you desirable to the point of distraction.”

Looking forward to more.

Now cracks a noble heart. Good-night, sweet [Spooks];
And flights of angels sing thee to thy rest.

~Wm. Shakespeare, Hamlet
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