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Extraordinary Rendition Part VII
13-07-2011, 01:19 PM
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RE: Extraordinary Rendition Part VII
Well, shoot! I was hoping that Malcolm would be released in this chapter so he could bang Harry and Ruth's heads together! Where are Erin and Dimitri with the snatch-back plan when you need them?

Favorite bits:

- Calum's naivety. I thought he might be a straight-forward baddie but you turned it. It's better this way.
- The way Harry turned Calum and made him want to earn Harry's respect. Harry's the master!
- Dimitri's reaction to Harry's request to put a plan in place to get Malcolm back. Proof again that it does not take much to define all of the characters. They don't have to have a big revelatory scene. They just have to react to the situation at hand honestly.
- Harry realizing that he can't make a phone call because he busted his phone. LOL! Big Grin
- Malcolm trying so hard to do the right thing in that situation. Malcolm has reserves of bravery that even he is not aware of. I hope he gets to use it?

Now cracks a noble heart. Good-night, sweet [Spooks];
And flights of angels sing thee to thy rest.

~Wm. Shakespeare, Hamlet
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Extraordinary Rendition Part VII - Silktie - 13-07-2011, 08:34 AM
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