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13-12-2011, 07:14 PM
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 RE: Requiem for the Dead Part I
Yea! A new one!
Ice water in his veins then as now. The flashback to the interrogation is particularly vivid and striking. Connie's voice is perfect. The quick changes in scene and time work very well. Didn't feel jarring at all. Now see here you!  Strapping a child to a bomb on Ruth's birthday!?!?! I think every iota of my maternal instincts just imploded in my brain. (*stalks off sputtering in disgusted anger*) Seriously though, something like that could read melodramatic, but not with you at the helm. That might be the worst possible choice for Harry to be faced with in *honour* of Ruth's birthday, given...ya know...the history. Perfectly chosen and pitched.  Really curious to see where you take this. Now cracks a noble heart. Good-night, sweet [Spooks]; And flights of angels sing thee to thy rest. ~Wm. Shakespeare, Hamlet |
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Requiem for the Dead Part I - Silktie - 11-12-2011, 02:17 PM
RE: Requiem for the Dead Part I - Tea Lady - 11-12-2011, 03:09 PM
RE: Requiem for the Dead Part I - pookster - 11-12-2011, 07:47 PM
RE: Requiem for the Dead Part I - Sparky - 12-12-2011, 06:37 AM
RE: Requiem for the Dead Part I - Blackcoat - 12-12-2011, 01:17 PM
RE: Requiem for the Dead Part I - A Cousin - 13-12-2011 07:14 PM
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