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29-12-2009, 06:43 PM
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RE: False Omen
Well, if you insist...
Kidding. The thing that puts me off most of all is when writers don't proof-read their stories properly and post it with a lot of errors. Especially if you know that they are actually English speaking. But I didn't spot a single error in yours, so well done. 
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29-12-2009, 06:45 PM
Post: #12
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RE: False Omen
I am a compulsive editor. Seriously.
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29-12-2009, 06:59 PM
Post: #13
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RE: False Omen
Lol, me too! I can't even post this short message without re-reading it three times to check for errors.
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29-12-2009, 08:55 PM
Post: #14
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RE: False Omen
A great read. We really do have some members on this forum with real talent.
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30-12-2009, 08:11 PM
Post: #15
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RE: False Omen
Good start. Like the Ruth-perspective idea and the twist at the end is interesting. I'm onto chap 2 right now!
 "What is the truth?" "Betrayal is a cancer. Let it eat your soul, not mine." "Please tell me this isn't going where I think it's going." |
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