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08-02-2010, 08:06 PM
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RE: Unmentionable
This is outstanding -- such controlled use of language, tight structure, and wonderful imagery. Insightful use of the Ros personna, too. And I especially loved bringing in Adam's line at the end. A really good read -- thanks.
 "What is the truth?" "Betrayal is a cancer. Let it eat your soul, not mine." "Please tell me this isn't going where I think it's going." |
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Unmentionable - Nia M - 07-02-2010, 07:36 PM
RE: Unmentionable - JHyde - 08-02-2010, 04:08 AM
RE: Unmentionable - HellsBells - 08-02-2010, 04:06 PM
RE: Unmentionable - Nia M - 08-02-2010, 04:23 PM
RE: Unmentionable - JHyde - 08-02-2010, 04:26 PM
RE: Unmentionable - almh - 08-02-2010, 07:31 PM
RE: Unmentionable - lwhite53 - 08-02-2010 08:06 PM
RE: Unmentionable - Nia M - 08-02-2010, 08:23 PM
RE: Unmentionable - Kazters - 08-07-2010, 07:19 PM
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