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False Omen Ch. 2
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30-12-2009, 07:35 PM
Post: #21
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RE: False Omen Ch. 2
Haha oh no, am I THAT predictable
 
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30-12-2009, 07:37 PM
Post: #22
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RE: False Omen Ch. 2
:shakes head:
BTW JHyde - I just went on fanfiction.net and started reading a new piece of fanfiction that I hadn't read before, thought I recognised it from somewhere until I realised it was this story  
DANNY - Placements all over the shop. Back up vehicles, chopper support if we need it. Bomb disposal with a signal jammer for Mary’s trademark remote control blasts. And Tom here’s doing the catering. Mate. You are so covered. |
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30-12-2009, 08:22 PM
Post: #23
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RE: False Omen Ch. 2
Really good!! Pacing is excellent, dialogue is both realistic and believable for the characters, like others I also enjoyed the Lucas/Ruth interaction. Harry seemed a bit restrained but then came through at the end, as Ruth's teaboy yet -- I like that image, lol. Eagerly awaiting the next chap.
 "What is the truth?" "Betrayal is a cancer. Let it eat your soul, not mine." "Please tell me this isn't going where I think it's going." |
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30-12-2009, 08:24 PM
Post: #24
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RE: False Omen Ch. 2
Harry wasn't in chapter 2 much at all, which I really didn't like. But plenty of him to come, I promise!
I'm going to try and crack on with this tomorrow before work. Hopefully by New Years Day you will have new fan fic to enjoy before Doctor Who  Thanks for your kind words. ![[Image: colleagues.png]](http://i973.photobucket.com/albums/ae211/TygerMag/spooks/colleagues.png) Many thanks to Tyger for a terrific signature |
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30-12-2009, 08:29 PM
Post: #25
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RE: False Omen Ch. 2
Well done. I am enjoying this although I hope Lucas does not get any ideas about Ruth. She is Harry's girl....although that may make an interesting twist !!
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30-12-2009, 08:31 PM
Post: #26
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RE: False Omen Ch. 2
No way. Whatever else happens I PROMISE Ruth will not be interested in Lucas and vice versa.
Many thanks to Tyger for a terrific signature |
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30-12-2009, 08:43 PM
Post: #27
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RE: False Omen Ch. 2
What, even if she puts a wig on?
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31-12-2009, 12:16 AM
Post: #28
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RE: False Omen Ch. 2
(30-12-2009 08:43 PM)Tea Lady Wrote: What, even if she puts a wig on? what, even if he takes his top off? 
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31-12-2009, 12:23 AM
Post: #29
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RE: False Omen Ch. 2
They aren't impervious to the other's charms but it's definitely not romantic. I'm a big believer of relationships between men and women that are just based on friendship, with nothing more or less, and I live it too. So I always try and have that in what I write. I usually compare my close male friends to being extra, adopted brothers; nothing romantic.
Ruth and Lucas are both gentle people - I've always thought Lucas finds the physical aspect of this job more repellent than Tom or Adam did. Many thanks to Tyger for a terrific signature |
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31-12-2009, 12:26 AM
Post: #30
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RE: False Omen Ch. 2
I was only (half) kidding - the friends aspect is what I like so much about it.. I don't think Lucas has too many.. or Ruth, for that matter (I guess that comes wit the territory).. I'm looking forward to their next scene together
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