False Omen Ch. 2
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30-12-2009, 07:35 PM
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RE: False Omen Ch. 2
Haha oh no, am I THAT predictable
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30-12-2009, 07:37 PM
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RE: False Omen Ch. 2
:shakes head:
BTW JHyde - I just went on fanfiction.net and started reading a new piece of fanfiction that I hadn't read before, thought I recognised it from somewhere until I realised it was this story ![]() ![]() DANNY - Placements all over the shop. Back up vehicles, chopper support if we need it. Bomb disposal with a signal jammer for Mary’s trademark remote control blasts. And Tom here’s doing the catering. Mate. You are so covered. |
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30-12-2009, 08:22 PM
Post: #23
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RE: False Omen Ch. 2
Really good!! Pacing is excellent, dialogue is both realistic and believable for the characters, like others I also enjoyed the Lucas/Ruth interaction. Harry seemed a bit restrained but then came through at the end, as Ruth's teaboy yet -- I like that image, lol. Eagerly awaiting the next chap.
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30-12-2009, 08:24 PM
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RE: False Omen Ch. 2
Harry wasn't in chapter 2 much at all, which I really didn't like. But plenty of him to come, I promise!
I'm going to try and crack on with this tomorrow before work. Hopefully by New Years Day you will have new fan fic to enjoy before Doctor Who ![]() Thanks for your kind words. ![]() Many thanks to Tyger for a terrific signature |
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30-12-2009, 08:29 PM
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RE: False Omen Ch. 2
Well done. I am enjoying this although I hope Lucas does not get any ideas about Ruth. She is Harry's girl....although that may make an interesting twist !!
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30-12-2009, 08:31 PM
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No way. Whatever else happens I PROMISE Ruth will not be interested in Lucas and vice versa.
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30-12-2009, 08:43 PM
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RE: False Omen Ch. 2
What, even if she puts a wig on?
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31-12-2009, 12:16 AM
Post: #28
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RE: False Omen Ch. 2
(30-12-2009 08:43 PM)Tea Lady Wrote: What, even if she puts a wig on? what, even if he takes his top off? ![]() ![]() |
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31-12-2009, 12:23 AM
Post: #29
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RE: False Omen Ch. 2
They aren't impervious to the other's charms but it's definitely not romantic. I'm a big believer of relationships between men and women that are just based on friendship, with nothing more or less, and I live it too. So I always try and have that in what I write. I usually compare my close male friends to being extra, adopted brothers; nothing romantic.
Ruth and Lucas are both gentle people - I've always thought Lucas finds the physical aspect of this job more repellent than Tom or Adam did. ![]() Many thanks to Tyger for a terrific signature |
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31-12-2009, 12:26 AM
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RE: False Omen Ch. 2
I was only (half) kidding - the friends aspect is what I like so much about it.. I don't think Lucas has too many.. or Ruth, for that matter (I guess that comes wit the territory).. I'm looking forward to their next scene together
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